22 Jan 2008

vesperial comparatives




that act of surface whispering

a minuet

protective

lifted to softer ground
lifted around this person
with his late[midnight gesture

light softer lifted off
the emerging of morning whisper softer
than a morning soul

2 comments:

Sheila Murphy said...

very beautiful, Carmen. Thank you for this.

crescent said...

The shadow's shadow....