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23 Nov 2007

Vespers (31)

simplicity (preached locus
braves sweetness (filled
and the shrill (fate

sixty six degree (uncombed
morning by (way of
contrast (knowing

and (rejoinder
pain made (plainsong
vivid at center (hear

depth settles in (command
one locates (commencement
sleep (upon a lovely

ritual (trail
healing past (lumbering sun
the ritual cleanse (drops down

I treasure while (holding
you reassure (the present
intaken (handsome

then (weightlift seeds
released warm (caveat
clarity once placed (whole

against clean cotton (here
and lifted (forward
from (learning

relic (each
peace with (a pleasure
comfort and containment (bless

2 Comments:

  • At 1:45 am , Blogger conniemadway said...

    this is really interesting usage of parentheses. but i'll be honest, i had to read it a couple of times. i really like your style though.

     
  • At 3:42 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    what's a parenthesis? Good grief!! I just stick 'em werds on t' page (or the not a page, page)!

     

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