1 Aug 2007

blood (up) 'locate

and 'ugged
reaching over moving
(x/y's) meters leg
length (right/left)
(patting content) elbow inner arm(s)
(melting) "wait,
use it again, reach'd"
relocated during ambulance
(stops) swing/swing/swing
concrete (lands) linen blood red
"drip it, drip it
out, again
swing it" pencil
written (ing) swing around
facing "swing it,
to nothing used't"

4 comments:

Crescentsi said...

Thanks Harry - I haven't heard from you for ages.

I love the flow/rhythm - great!

Simon

carmen racovitza said...

[written blood moving (x/y's)
reach'd" relocated (lands)

'locate

swing/swing/swing concrete red
"drip it" ambulance (stops) nothing 'ugged reaching (ing) linen drips "wait, use again, around over it, elbow it
arm(s) (melting)
content) (up) (right/left) (patting again
swing "swing meters

blood]

hi, harry

Crescentsi said...

Thanks for your text Carmen. Remember you can always post it in its own right (if you know what I mean)!

Uhg Too much Internet :-/

Simon

harry k stammer said...

carmen, love what you did... post it as Simon suggested.


cheers, harry