3 Oct 2007

Light Vespers (18)


the young breathing green


young (18) dew is in text evidence

text renewal


the modesty of garden mist is fathering

still gate commitments


a midnight /(a talisman) dreams

heavy and open)

emblems turn censure along /across standpoints comprising Platonic beliefs


misconforming Vespers expand while

(hot steam prayers evolve

others than the stillness of (hush)


please, choose your text

14 comments:

Sheila Murphy said...

wow, Carmen. beautiful

foam said...

that's lovely..

carmen said...

thanks, ...sheila...foam...

i don't feel it as beautiful or lovely,
i feel it a tracing paperpoem..

crescent said...

disobject(ion) or parasubjetifion !

neo lingua franca! Or Neo Esporanto !

carmen said...

you frighten me, simon.....lol

crescent said...

Ha ha!! Just get some words from different languages and form neologisms with them :-)

With the advent of so much multiculturalism in UK (and beyond) we may need a new language to comprehend each other - or more likely it will change English, French, German, etc.

carmen said...

this is exactly what we are doing...

crescent said...

Coooool!! :-)

crescent said...

Thanks for the visit Foam :D

Simon

carmen said...

crescent, this is exactly what WE ALL are doing...
what do you take me for ?? the master linguist ??

carmen said...

crescent..... :)

carmen said...

:) .....crescent

crescent said...

I don't know Carmen - there seems to be less poetic experimentation these days on the Internet.

Video is more the in-thing. And photography.

Words changed to images amazingly quickly - perhaps sound next?

crescent said...

Ultimately the computer programmers are the artists. Artists design, using the art tools that computer programmers create.

Without computer programs there would be no "Internet Art". This is not the same as a violin maker being a musician. The art is the Internet, the "artist" the musician to the composer - the computer programmer.

Therefore, the artist is inseperable from the general public. Everyone is an artist. The idea of an artist has more to do with status (according to contemporaneous, societal trends) than with a particular set of talents, or indeed opinions or ideas.