sAyingsometHing

Art, poetry, digital art, photography, criticism and essays.

21 Dec 2007

to Sheila...




the smooth outcast

is whispering

head down


the place of truth whispers

about the truth of place

as it sees it


first

make an account of my syllables

all over the story 's whispering modes


: inference :


a blatant blond unison

unisons me

with force


my story is heavily formatting noises


heresy matter


i am

castaway on a much lower place

for ever practising

emblem noises

11 Comments:

  • At 2:43 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    Very nice Carmen :-)

    Simon

     
  • At 5:24 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    emblem noises...i am such a braggart, simon...lol

    thanks :)

     
  • At 6:00 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    it's the transition from poetry to images. Sometimes it feels uncomfortable, other times it works well.

     
  • At 4:45 am , Blogger Sheila Murphy said...

    Wow - this is lovely, Carmen, and I'm honored and grateful. Thank you!

     
  • At 9:38 am , Blogger carmen said...

    ;) , sheila...
    :) , simon...

    thanks

     
  • At 12:18 am , Blogger Ruela said...

    cool.

    ;)

     
  • At 1:43 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    hi, ruela, i'm sure you refer to the pic...:)
    yes, it is cool...the roots are cool...

     
  • At 2:13 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    In warm soil.....

     
  • At 6:27 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    hi, crescent...yes, warm soil...:)

    happy new year, simon !!!!!!!!!!!

     
  • At 9:40 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    Thank you Carmen - you have a great New Year :)

    oils waxing verbatim, slowly like baying, exacerbator, waning, reform!

     
  • At 10:28 am , Blogger carmen said...

    are you sure all the above wish items are good, simon ??

    thanks, if it is all good, the same to you, too ;)

     

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