hypnotic icing
he was carving by the pool
changed to ahypnotic puddle
pale beside the pool
his hands were scratched
by his bright chisel
by his knife
I watched the episode
an afternoon with sunlight
and dismissive new vibrations
kin to shapely rest
distinct from still-all-night
preceding fever we were cast in
blue gray diamonds
we were salt alone
we were our privileged children
who would hide like ducks
beside canal at naptime
where I walked while thinking
of the man who bled the soul
from ice his quick eye
and the change from solid
to a diminution
scrapily the audio went
furious not furtive
while I watched
10 Oct 2006
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3 comments:
This is absolutely fantastic. Really, brillant.
And another comment: I adore experimental writing and the more I read this piece it grows on me. The line about being salt is amazing; so individual. Lovely.
I am very grateful for your response. Welcome and very seriously taken - thank you.
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