22 Aug 2008

Extrinsic/Intrinsic

That echo of your face was a peculiar place
extrinsic to knowledge, that is the
sense sits that I am retracing memory
that some are lost

walking by the side of themselves exogenous
to intrinsicness as if your truth and
mine must collide to make a journey
instinctively
together

Others have us blown apart and into pieces
to cut out their intrinsic identity
by the faux pas of money
dis heritage is inclemently seedy
to
break

back distance that others swell to
concord and mention (perhaps) the strength
of weakness and disharmony, identity through
losing it and losing out from those
who'd
rather

keep us rung out and circled beyond
the esoteric power of knowledge and money
still turning the topsoil, for fear of rain
that saps the buds and drowns the spuds
long
winding

and jovial our skies are far meaner
than yours a thick plastic that this landscape
ruminant and thick with meaning
is Cyclopsed copsed and given a string
of
unaffordable

inexpensive housing crowding bushes and trees
into an ambiance, vicarious reality broaching
the weather in your eyes, darker mysterious
your sanity crumbling week by week until
the merest thing
is convolution

Your "thing" is to distance us from our tradition
madness pulls far from reason
and the less of reason that it is
the greater of reason it becomes
You
a

reason to rewrite cultures! And you are as mad
as mad can be! And in our writing
we have little to write but much to do, to accept
how wrong we will be to have reasoned
in
such

a manner when our heritage is changed
by you and
by others.
Altered,
not shattered.....

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

this writing
altered
losing our memory that we have blown blown mad
beyond the jovial
beyond the memory
merest memory that reasoned collide in our crumbling eyes peculiar Extrinsic/Intrinsic crowding
bushes darker than reason reason and the journey instinctively retraces the journey
instinctively together
Cyclopsed as part of the ambiance knowledge,
accept how intrinsic your ambiance is
Extrinsic/Intrinsic Extrinsic/Intrinsic echoes reality
plastic reality
darker
strength of intrinsicness
strength of jovial knowledge
losing knowledge in the act

spuds long winding & walking in the wrong skies of
faux pas
faux reason
faux rain

Crescentsi said...

losing our memory that we have blown blown mad
beyond the jovial
beyond the me ether
Cyclopsed as part of the ambiance knowledge,
accept how intrinsic reason reason and the journey son

the ambiance knowledge,
accept how intrinsic your
beyond the me ether
Extrinsic/Intrinsic Extrinsic/Intrinsic echoes reality

plastic reality
darker
this writing altered
crowding
spuds long winding & walking in the wrong skies

:-)