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22 Aug 2008

Extrinsic/Intrinsic

That echo of your face was a peculiar place
extrinsic to knowledge, that is the
sense sits that I am retracing memory
that some are lost

walking by the side of themselves exogenous
to intrinsicness as if your truth and
mine must collide to make a journey
instinctively
together

Others have us blown apart and into pieces
to cut out their intrinsic identity
by the faux pas of money
dis heritage is inclemently seedy
to
break

back distance that others swell to
concord and mention (perhaps) the strength
of weakness and disharmony, identity through
losing it and losing out from those
who'd
rather

keep us rung out and circled beyond
the esoteric power of knowledge and money
still turning the topsoil, for fear of rain
that saps the buds and drowns the spuds
long
winding

and jovial our skies are far meaner
than yours a thick plastic that this landscape
ruminant and thick with meaning
is Cyclopsed copsed and given a string
of
unaffordable

inexpensive housing crowding bushes and trees
into an ambiance, vicarious reality broaching
the weather in your eyes, darker mysterious
your sanity crumbling week by week until
the merest thing
is convolution

Your "thing" is to distance us from our tradition
madness pulls far from reason
and the less of reason that it is
the greater of reason it becomes
You
a

reason to rewrite cultures! And you are as mad
as mad can be! And in our writing
we have little to write but much to do, to accept
how wrong we will be to have reasoned
in
such

a manner when our heritage is changed
by you and
by others.
Altered,
not shattered.....

2 Comments:

  • At 2:36 pm , Anonymous carmen racovitza said...

    this writing
    altered
    losing our memory that we have blown blown mad
    beyond the jovial
    beyond the memory
    merest memory that reasoned collide in our crumbling eyes peculiar Extrinsic/Intrinsic crowding
    bushes darker than reason reason and the journey instinctively retraces the journey
    instinctively together
    Cyclopsed as part of the ambiance knowledge,
    accept how intrinsic your ambiance is
    Extrinsic/Intrinsic Extrinsic/Intrinsic echoes reality
    plastic reality
    darker
    strength of intrinsicness
    strength of jovial knowledge
    losing knowledge in the act

    spuds long winding & walking in the wrong skies of
    faux pas
    faux reason
    faux rain

     
  • At 7:10 pm , Blogger crescent said...

    losing our memory that we have blown blown mad
    beyond the jovial
    beyond the me ether
    Cyclopsed as part of the ambiance knowledge,
    accept how intrinsic reason reason and the journey son

    the ambiance knowledge,
    accept how intrinsic your
    beyond the me ether
    Extrinsic/Intrinsic Extrinsic/Intrinsic echoes reality

    plastic reality
    darker
    this writing altered
    crowding
    spuds long winding & walking in the wrong skies

    :-)

     

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