18 May 2007

blag poem

where

worlds we have lived in

we are islands

tap55

tangled 33

it's better to go to the shops

I watch them change

like perceiving feelings

rearrange

step out 66

Worlds we have known

Words we have said

lives we have seen

mirror like an ocean

fall apart apt glue

cornered by change

drum 'n' bass

curling (concave(

apparition laser light

deja vu

entre nous

like beat 8

body popping contrary

ninety nine

clear mind

cloud extrapolate

rinse that dye right out of my hair

pugnacious

west coast

pornograph

elf 68

arthur

objetif 2

pharmacopia

clinical intention

medical model

phraseology 69

hand shake

back chat

pixelated motorway

yellow chance

lady luck

cosmopolite

politician

erudite

goddess theory

meaningless imagery

thespian

protein

class 7

comb

womb

hello

carp

residual

corpus

hieroglyphical

road map

traffic management

esoteria

calligrapher

words we choose

sense of image

the soul of reason

walk attribution

re: attrition

'twixt

2 comments:

carmen racovitza said...

my corner-glued poem
theory meaningless
my apt outmind clouds
-dye- dye-
esoteria management- mere fake
calligrapher words deja light present nine clear images:

ocean model in poem mind
look like
cloud of clinical soul
but
world's change body
teaches us that
change has feelings
let's
rearrange next step (concave(
as
apparition islands - tangled images
'cause
map traffic map traffic-purechance

lady chooses sense to walk reason
bla bla bla
all lives have medical intention



crescent, your poem ...oh, your poem.....intense and...ageless ??

Crescentsi said...

Merci Carmen

Ageless! That is very high praise!

And your response is great!!

Thanks
Simon