sAyingsometHing

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25 May 2007

shoulders

we
are never
broad enough we

exist as we
are perceived
we

overtake
fashion of
trying to exist

so we exist
from here
we

replicate
dislocation being
from way within

and thin we
elevate our
tithing

fractional
each equals
a greater worth

despite the diminution
revered for
minisculia

5 Comments:

  • At 7:34 am , Blogger carmen said...

    i exist within for minusculia
    and i am within and exist

    a dislocation never broadly
    perceived

    i elevate enough
    i exist

    but dislocation
    diminution
    is too thin


    (hi, sheila, don't take me seriously...i don't feel well...
    i am being philosophical today)

     
  • At 7:51 am , Blogger Sheila Murphy said...

    Carmen, you get well ASAP! You must not miss the long weekend! :) Take care - I love your responses.

     
  • At 3:03 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    thanks, sheila...but your poems are stunning...i saw some in other places as well...i am your extension, nothing else...

     
  • At 1:59 am , Blogger Sheila Murphy said...

    au contraire - MUCH MUCH more!

     
  • At 3:04 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    au contraire 2

     

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