17 Mar 2007

Crescent/Carmen/LittleLamb/the4X

the reflector (stills) instead projects me disappointedly with the anticipation, because my finger was still on button side shivering hi humpty dumpty and she was walking past the(close)How not to right a poem may be the edge
the distance between your feet and your armpit(gain) I
am humpty dumpty i triggered the key his half(porridge) elicit
esoshape endoscar exotwat workin for fuckin peanuts what thingy these are all suggestions kuh
I am imagining to hear puff the palpitation sound am
because i am fantasizing all kinds of you

13 comments:

carmen racovitza said...

i am humpty dumpty...

Little Lamb said...

Hi Humpty Dumpty!

siel:t said...

this has to be my favourite humpty dumpty porridge poem.

carmen racovitza said...

and she was walking lightly past the sleeping guards /boom

carmen racovitza said...

hi, little lamb...
hi, eric...

carmen racovitza said...

she is a charming girl, taciturn, hunchbacked and pale-faced, said he...


but, simon, which are the rules of writing a collective poem...i don't get it ...are there any key words that trigger off... the plot or what...help me, please

thanks simon ,thanks LL

Crescentsi said...

intuition Carmen, the strange feeling of it or not :-)

Kris knows

Crescentsi said...

I like sticking in overheard conversations, but thats just my bias, thingy

carmen racovitza said...

what's thingy??

carmen racovitza said...

"any plans for the future,pal?"

carmen racovitza said...

you, round bull...

carmen racovitza said...

these are all suggestions for the coll poem, of course...

Crescentsi said...

Damn I added 4 lines and it's gone :-(

Simon