18 Mar 2007

Vespers (2)

darkness its own
silk trespasses on mid
winter threads of
fallen snow in time to
remedy the world
pictures seen through
clouds offer more than
clouds the sky no different
any more than peace remains
still plentiful enduring
parsed via desire not
happiness exactly

4 comments:

carmen racovitza said...

(more peace

still different trespasses on still peace

no silk snow

remedy desire skies more clouds enduring peace on thread pictures

remains)


vespers 2 - perfect twilight poem, sheila

Sheila Murphy said...

thanks, Carmen!

carmen racovitza said...

(more peace

still different trespasses on still peace

no silk snow

remedy desire skies more clouds

enduring peace on thread pictures

remains)

vespers 2 - perfect twilight poem, sheila

carmen racovitza said...

this is the way i want to see the little poem, sheila,the fifth line appeared distorted...i changed its place...
thanks, again...