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18 Mar 2007

Vespers (2)

darkness its own
silk trespasses on mid
winter threads of
fallen snow in time to
remedy the world
pictures seen through
clouds offer more than
clouds the sky no different
any more than peace remains
still plentiful enduring
parsed via desire not
happiness exactly

4 Comments:

  • At 7:35 am , Blogger carmen said...

    (more peace

    still different trespasses on still peace

    no silk snow

    remedy desire skies more clouds enduring peace on thread pictures

    remains)


    vespers 2 - perfect twilight poem, sheila

     
  • At 5:16 pm , Blogger Sheila Murphy said...

    thanks, Carmen!

     
  • At 7:25 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    (more peace

    still different trespasses on still peace

    no silk snow

    remedy desire skies more clouds

    enduring peace on thread pictures

    remains)

    vespers 2 - perfect twilight poem, sheila

     
  • At 7:30 pm , Blogger carmen said...

    this is the way i want to see the little poem, sheila,the fifth line appeared distorted...i changed its place...
    thanks, again...

     

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